tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5234217811962325232.post1463230437186298479..comments2009-12-04T11:57:59.648-08:00Comments on Blog dedos Its yummy and full of San-Serifs mmmmmm feel that smooth type go down.: Match Kinetic Type Final AnimationV whickyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09885376507716976079noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5234217811962325232.post-39002989927714179062008-10-13T08:10:00.000-07:002008-10-13T08:10:00.000-07:00enjoying-the striking action at the beginning, and...enjoying-<BR/><BR/>the striking action at the beginning, and how it is so instant and eager. but it might also be a bit too fast, because i had to watch it again to even understand the meaning of that action.<BR/><BR/>the blurry transitions through out each action are very nice and fluid.<BR/><BR/>the flames of the letters off "MATCH" came out well, and i also enjoy how it flickers on and off through out.<BR/><BR/>the last action "break", i enjoy how it kinda feathers down off the stage.<BR/><BR/>work on-<BR/><BR/>maybe altering the direction of the first action "strike". and take it the route of frustrating strikes.<BR/>ex: miss firing multiple times.<BR/><BR/>the "burning" action, could it could be longer? since that action is what you want to be the main focus, also you could have some fun with spontaneous variety.<BR/><BR/>the transitioning of the letters at the end, from actions "burning-break" i would like to see a more fluid blurry effect from letter to letter.<BR/><BR/>other than that you animation has a very nice playful feeling to it, and also grasps the idea and i believe the audience receives the message well.<BR/><BR/>nicely done ^-^tealesmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12361224997926830509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5234217811962325232.post-59200338095023317782008-10-13T07:42:00.000-07:002008-10-13T07:42:00.000-07:00Overall, I think your animation shows that you hav...Overall, I think your animation shows that you have a pretty good grasp on the concepts that made up the project objectives. Through your animation though, I did notice a few issues. <BR/><BR><BR>The striking motion seems a bit fast overall, and some of the strikes seem a bit wide (in relation to each other, as well as the size of an actual match). The blur transition you used from the first action to the second seems a bit weird, unnecessary even. I think you would have done fine just starting the letters on fire, just like you put them out in the end. <BR/><BR><BR>Your flame effect is nice. While it would have been nice to have animated fire, I think you really gave the <I>feel</I> of burning the way you treated the flickers. The burning out is a bit confusing because the letters that lit last go out first. Wouldn't the letters that first caught flame burn down first? <BR/><BR><BR>I think you resolved some of the issues you had with the match breaking. The cracking and falling off seems a bit more true to the actual motion now, instead of being more awkward, breaking straight down the center.Michael Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13611896861086674582noreply@blogger.com